Making It to the Top: Rock Bottom and Climbing Up Poem
- Deborah Ann Martin
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Climbing Out of the Chaos
I wrote this poem when I was a teenager when everything felt hard and when everything felt overwhelming.
You're trying to figure out who you are, who your friends really are, and how the world actually works. You’re just trying to figure out who you are. Your friendships change.
Your family has rules you don’t always understand.
You're dealing with family drama, school pressures, heartbreak, expectations, and emotions that hit you like waves. You’re growing, aching, and trying to find meaning in a world that often feels upside down.
During that time, it felt like I was constantly falling emotionally, mentally, spiritually.
And just when I thought I was making progress, I’d slip again. It felt like I was climbing a steep hill just to survive the day.
Some days I’d try and tumble all the way back down.
Making It to the Top is about those moments.
When you hit rock bottom and feel like no one understands.
But somehow, some way, a light appears. A hand reaches down. And you rise.
Making It to the Top
When you’re down,
It seems like no one’s around.
Time seems to stand still
As you’re climbing that steep hill.
You’re struggling to reach the top
When your troubles make you stop.
You tumble back down
Until you reach the ground.
The harder you try
The more you want to cry.
It seems like an endless fight
When no answers are in sight.
You look up and see a glimmer of hope
So now you can cope.
Our higher power reaches out his hand
And shows you his master plan.
From Love and Heartache Moments: Healing Poems After Divorce and Breakups
Part of the Life Moments Series
© 2025 Deborah Ann Martin. All rights reserved.
Reflection on Falling Is Part of Climbing
Sometimes life knocks you flat on your face.
It doesn’t always come from one thing sometimes it’s just a slow, heavy build-up of stress, fear, sadness, or confusion.
And when you're a teen (or even an adult), you might feel like the climb back up is impossible.
This poem is a reminder that you’re not alone in that feeling.
There is a way forward.
There is a light at the top of that hill.
And even if you slide back down, even if you have to start over again, you’re still learning, growing, and getting stronger.
Whether you're leaning on your faith, your friends, or your own grit, healing is possible.
There is hope. There is help. And there is a future you haven’t met yet.
The Style Behind the Words
Poetry Style Name: Narrative Inspirational Poem
Structure and Form: 16-line poem in rhyming couplets (AABB rhyme scheme)
Tone: Honest, heavy, uplifting
Poetic Devices:
Metaphor: Climbing a hill as life’s emotional struggle
Alliteration: “struggling to stop,” “glimmer of hope”
Faith Imagery: “Our higher power reaches out his hand”
Theme: Emotional pain, rock bottom, hope, healing, faith
Reading Level: 6th grade and up easy to understand, emotionally deep
Explore More Love and Heartache Moments
If Making It to the Top touched something inside you, you’ll find more healing, hope, and raw honesty in Love and Heartache Moments: Healing Poems After Divorce and Breakups.
About the Life Moments Series
This poem is part of the Life Moments Series, created to give voice to the quiet struggles and big feelings we all face at different times in life.
If you're hurting, growing, healing, or surviving these poems are for you.
References
Love and Heartache Moments: Healing Poems After Divorce and Breakups, Deborah Ann Martin, 2025.
Deborah Ann Martin Amazon Author Central Page: https://www.amazon.com/author/deborahamartin
About the Author:
Deborah Ann Martin is the founder of Surviving Life Lessons, a published author, poet, speaker, and trainer with over 20 years of management experience across multiple industries. An MBA graduate, U.S. veteran, single mother, and rare cancer survivor, Deborah brings both professional expertise and lived experience to her writing on resilience, leadership, personal growth, and overcoming adversity. Her mission is to empower others with practical wisdom and real-life insight to navigate life’s challenges with strength and purpose.
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